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my eyes aren't dry but tears dare not betray the heart of this broken teen, hidden down behind the lids they wait for the time when again it is true to cry from joy or pain. Release the eyes now the heart cries give free the thoughts and feelings hidden within these
walls you built so high defending your last reasons against the pain.
Kiss the eyes of my angel there she lies never to lift an arm again, too late was I to enter that door could I have made a difference my soul will always cry you could have been an answer to that hidden pain away from the world she hid herself until that final breath she cried...I heard you slipping away from the world deep into a shell below my heart away from me god please come back.
Again the pain holds me deep wthin my walls, the tears tease upon the lips don't you dare fall the heart cries out a forbidden pain I'm lost within there's nothing to shame they tell me lost upon my world I drift away from you that soulless ship. I loved you yet you left.
walls you built so high defending your last reasons against the pain.
Kiss the eyes of my angel there she lies never to lift an arm again, too late was I to enter that door could I have made a difference my soul will always cry you could have been an answer to that hidden pain away from the world she hid herself until that final breath she cried...I heard you slipping away from the world deep into a shell below my heart away from me god please come back.
Again the pain holds me deep wthin my walls, the tears tease upon the lips don't you dare fall the heart cries out a forbidden pain I'm lost within there's nothing to shame they tell me lost upon my world I drift away from you that soulless ship. I loved you yet you left.
All I can say is this suddenly boiled out when I was chatting with a friend about crying...thanks have to go out to Stone Sour for the lyrics crying in the background. It helped release something...beyond the words.
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The current structure seems a little limp. I think organizing it into lines may make it a little more solid. But the real power lies in the words, and they are wonderful. Very powerful imagery and emotion.