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Days pass by and still
my thoughts are filled with you.
Tear stained, my face resists
the cracked attempts at smiling.
Faces, unbidden, rise to prominance,
blotting out the vision of your lies
Thoughts of hearts and feelings
restrained with chains of cold iron
Clocks spin with passing time gone bad
Stuck in reverse, playing back unwanted.
Spectors of a past I've long since left behind
Torture I no longer feel - I'm so over you
©2004-2009 ~anduril
:iconanduril:

Author's Comments

Its funny...I'm probably the happiest I've been in a while and this popped into my head. No special ex this is dealing with, just all of them I guess.

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:iconx-bobo-x:
awesome:)

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I wish there were cures for how people are.:sadangel:

Smarter then your average msn junkie. ;)
:iconblacktongue:
I like it, except in the last line, the "i'm so over you." the "so" just doesn't seem right.
but otherwise
excellent
:iconcougar204:
absolutely wonderful, and i know exactly where you are coming from with this. i agree with the previous comment about the last line. but this is so touching, wonderful job.

:hug:

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the best thing in life is knowing that the person you love loves you back. the worst thing is to watch the person you love love somebody else.

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